Osamah
Super Moderator
Number of posts : 153
Age : 33
Location : R.A.K
Registration date : 2008-05-10
 | | Subject: SUBMISSION By Waseem Wed Jun 18, 2008 8:30 pm | |
| ------yeh gana meri zindagi se bohot milta hain....to ghaur se suniyega------
mujhe meri zindagi mainn apni,
khwahishe mehsoos huin....
magar main bhula ke woo sabhi,
bardgaya jaise wo nahin.....
ab main yun akela behta,
apni zindagi se tang ho behta....
i dont have any route to go to,
someone out there hint me where to,
i don't have any girl to talk to,
they just hate me like i was a dumbo...........
pehle aisa nahin tha,
mere pas sabkuch tha........
Seems A Bit Funny....but really many bugs to fix.......
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Atiq
Adminstrator
Number of posts : 102
Age : 32
Location : Nakheel
Registration date : 2008-05-09
| | Subject: Re: SUBMISSION By Waseem Wed Jun 18, 2008 10:12 pm | |
| Mujhe kuch sunai nahi dia.....but i managed to read..
Its nice...and whats with the screaming? | |
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FahimK
Advance Member
Number of posts : 83
Age : 31
Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines
School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student
Registration date : 2008-05-16
| | Subject: Re: SUBMISSION By Waseem Wed Jun 18, 2008 11:26 pm | |
| true.;..i was gonna ask the same thing.....i dont get how the screaming is working......cant get it..
but rest is good | |
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Osamah
Super Moderator
Number of posts : 153
Age : 33
Location : R.A.K
Registration date : 2008-05-10
| | Subject: Re: SUBMISSION By Waseem Wed Jun 18, 2008 11:59 pm | |
| well the screaming is like james in alvida......and on.....get it? | |
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FahimK
Advance Member
Number of posts : 83
Age : 31
Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines
School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student
Registration date : 2008-05-16
| | Subject: Re: SUBMISSION By Waseem Thu Jun 19, 2008 12:09 am | |
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Salman
Adminstrator
Number of posts : 98
Age : 33
Location : Mamourah,Rak
School : Indian School 2008-2009
Registration date : 2008-05-09
| | Subject: Re: SUBMISSION By Waseem Thu Jun 19, 2008 1:44 am | |
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Osamah
Super Moderator
Number of posts : 153
Age : 33
Location : R.A.K
Registration date : 2008-05-10
| | Subject: Re: SUBMISSION By Waseem Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:46 pm | |
| come on people.....give me some ideas......ook i'll do some amendments myself | |
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