SUBMISSION: Love? -- Faux pas. - Aleks An.

Love? -- Faux pas.

You were never supposed to mean so much to me
Not that I ever thought this was meant to be
But as I stand here, exhausted and waiting
In the piercing cold, its raining and I'm thinking
How I despise the thought of loving you so much
Hate the moments we spend apart, deprived of your touch
My blood runs cold [or so I'm told]
In the depths of my now perished soul
I bury the feelings I have for you
But as much as I try to escape it
It grabs hold of me, stronger and more secure.
It hits me harder that not only have I fallen
But most certainly may be .. Sinking.
Drowning.
Fucking dying.

aLeks a.
9th December 2007
02.59 a.m.


P.S. Aleks and I are the same person. Aleks is like a stage name.

Beautifull......
Brilliant.

Really good!!

How does your tune go? ...for me its like...Hip-hop kinda....like Eminem singing this. ^_^

Honestly, don't really have a tune.
I just write. Not lyrical, just casual.. more on the poetic side.

ahhh.....almost like me...i dont really get a tune...but ....sometimes i kinda...rap it out ..haha..sounds gr8

nice.......good work.........