| SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ | |
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FahimK Advance Member
Number of posts : 83 Age : 31 Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 5:31 am | |
| ok..first i gotta say...i made this IN SCHOOL ..so it isnt complete NOR is it done right...its jus like...something i made up...im still fixing n trying to think more. Its real messy. There is no "Chorus" an all yet...cuz not done like i said..jus wanted to post this ...so i can keep it here n edit later n get suggestions or stuff...hope its ok... lemme no wat u all think...or...IF u think something of this ..cuz its not good ^_^ Shattered
[Chorus] *Its shattered, nothing in this life now matters. Im just a living body with no soul, living in this world for a reason i don't no.*
[Verse] I remember, the small necklace locket which had your initial. I had it with me, kept is safe and close to my heart, and never let it get harm.
I remember, it had these, three, diamonds on them. They were my meaning to be, and even before our relationship came to an end, these diamonds kept falling and breaking apart!!
And this is when I understood, that for me.... There is no reason to be. Don’t you see! This is what lies behind these symbols, that we pretend not to see!
The truth, is what we ignore and don’t want to live with. Only lies! That is what we want to be with.
Now we are no longer with each other, but still you talk, like nothing has ever happened before...before...before.
[Chorus x1]
[Verse 2]
You tell me you like me, Then you tell me you dont. What is the reason behind this, Why don't i get to know!!
What is it that i have done, That I have not even known!
.......(some music)
[Verse 3] ( i guess )
Now the tears are flowing down, like the stormy weather's rain falling from the sky. It feels like the Gods wrath is upon me, smiting me down, like I have the Spawn of Satan inside.
But something tells me, it isn't his wrath, but his mercy upon me, showing me the right path, and trying to keep me away from this meaningless life.
So now i just wait for the end, singing this sad song of my story, telling this to the people who are deceiving, that to be truthful, and don't tell or live with lies, because in the end of your life, there will be only Hell on your side.
[Chorus x1]
(lemme no about it...thx.)
Last edited by FahimK on Fri Jun 20, 2008 5:03 am; edited 9 times in total (Reason for editing : Editing the song) | |
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Atiq Adminstrator
Number of posts : 102 Age : 32 Location : Nakheel Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 5:27 pm | |
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Osamah Super Moderator
Number of posts : 153 Age : 33 Location : R.A.K Registration date : 2008-05-10
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 8:35 pm | |
| good.....well...you gotta work on the chorus.......its seriously good.....keep up..... | |
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Salman Adminstrator
Number of posts : 98 Age : 33 Location : Mamourah,Rak School : Indian School 2008-2009 Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 9:47 pm | |
| I Liked It Too..Let's see how it ends up.. | |
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S@llu Adminstrator
Number of posts : 151 Age : 33 Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 9:54 pm | |
| I strongly think this lyrics should be copyright ...wht abt u salman? | |
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Salman Adminstrator
Number of posts : 98 Age : 33 Location : Mamourah,Rak School : Indian School 2008-2009 Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 10:02 pm | |
| Ya I think It Should Be Copyrighted Once Fahim Finishes It Completely.... | |
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Atiq Adminstrator
Number of posts : 102 Age : 32 Location : Nakheel Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 10:08 pm | |
| U mean we should give the people the right to copy? | |
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Salman Adminstrator
Number of posts : 98 Age : 33 Location : Mamourah,Rak School : Indian School 2008-2009 Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 10:14 pm | |
| ^^We will be the first one to Copy it..!! | |
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Atiq Adminstrator
Number of posts : 102 Age : 32 Location : Nakheel Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 10:16 pm | |
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S@llu Adminstrator
Number of posts : 151 Age : 33 Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 10:17 pm | |
| we mean copyright protected ..
Definition: Creative artist's control of original work: the legal right of creative artists or publishers to control the use and reproduction of their original works
Copyright, branch of law granting authors the exclusive privilege to reproduce, distribute, perform, or display their creative works. The goal of copyright law is to encourage authors to invest effort in creating new works of art and literature. Copyright is one branch of the larger legal field known as intellectual property, which also includes trademark and patent law. Copyright law is the legal foundation protecting the work of many major industries, including book publishing, motion-picture production, music recording, and computer software development. These industries account for considerable economic activity in the United States, making copyright law a field of enormous economic importance.
Not every work of authorship is eligible for copyright. To qualify for copyright protection, a work must be both fixed and original. The law considers a work to be fixed if it is recorded in some permanent format. Acceptable ways of fixing a work include writing it down, storing it on a computer floppy disk or compact disc (CD), recording it on videotape, or sculpting it in marble. If a poet thinks of a new poem and recites it to an audience without writing it down, copyright does not protect the poem because it is not fixed. To be original, the work must not be copied from previously existing material and must display at least a reasonable amount of creativity. For example, if an author writes the words “the sky is blue” on a piece of paper, copyright does not protect the words because they lack sufficient creativity. Consequently, short phrases and titles are usually not protected by copyright, but in some circumstances they may be protected by trademark law.
Copyright only protects the words, notes, or images that the creator has used. It does not protect any ideas or concepts revealed by the work. If, for example, a scientist publishes an article explaining a new process for refining oil, the copyright prevents others from copying the words of that article. It does not, however, prevent anyone else from using the process described to refine oil. To protect the process, the scientist must obtain a patent. Similarly, if a novelist writes a book about a man obsessed about killing a whale, other people may write their own books on the same subject, as long as they do not use the exact words or a closely similar plot | |
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Atiq Adminstrator
Number of posts : 102 Age : 32 Location : Nakheel Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 10:19 pm | |
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Salman Adminstrator
Number of posts : 98 Age : 33 Location : Mamourah,Rak School : Indian School 2008-2009 Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed May 28, 2008 10:20 pm | |
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FahimK Advance Member
Number of posts : 83 Age : 31 Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Thu May 29, 2008 12:12 am | |
| wow...cool...thx guys, im happy u guys liked it ^-^.
i showed this song to like 2 guys here ..they liked it too ...^_^..so happy ..lol..
as for you guys to have this..umm..lemme thiiiink.. ..no im jus kidding.
u guys can have it. like use it, cuz i probably wont be singing as no band here....in which i am...i might be in one later, but yea...im making this so u guys can use it ..if u want to. i dunno about me using this....so all urs.. ..wen i finish it...which will take alot of time....the chorus ..trying to get it good ...so sorry for the wait ^_^
n how do u copyright ;p..cuz i don no how to...u guys shud do it. | |
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Atiq Adminstrator
Number of posts : 102 Age : 32 Location : Nakheel Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Thu May 29, 2008 2:17 am | |
| Take ur time . We've got exams anyway. | |
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FahimK Advance Member
Number of posts : 83 Age : 31 Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Thu May 29, 2008 7:06 am | |
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Osamah Super Moderator
Number of posts : 153 Age : 33 Location : R.A.K Registration date : 2008-05-10
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Thu May 29, 2008 7:40 pm | |
| dont worry man.....ones it's copyrighted....we may sing it on fancy fete...... | |
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FahimK Advance Member
Number of posts : 83 Age : 31 Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Thu May 29, 2008 8:24 pm | |
| sweet ^_^. That wud be awsome! | |
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FahimK Advance Member
Number of posts : 83 Age : 31 Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Sun Jun 01, 2008 4:34 am | |
| any suggestions about anything? got anything u want me to do? any help...lemme no ...cuz i think im done ..-_^ | |
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Salman Adminstrator
Number of posts : 98 Age : 33 Location : Mamourah,Rak School : Indian School 2008-2009 Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:07 pm | |
| We Are Quite Busy With Our Xamz..Once It Gets Over We Will See bout it.. | |
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FahimK Advance Member
Number of posts : 83 Age : 31 Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:59 pm | |
| oh oh..yea...sorry ..lol..i keep forgetting....no worries...ill wait | |
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Osamah Super Moderator
Number of posts : 153 Age : 33 Location : R.A.K Registration date : 2008-05-10
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed Jun 11, 2008 1:46 am | |
| back again....last exam left.........monitoring the site....ook people whats new..............? | |
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FahimK Advance Member
Number of posts : 83 Age : 31 Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Wed Jun 11, 2008 4:35 am | |
| well...i think the songs done..kinda....an i cant do much on it i guess....cuz i got exams this week coming...AND......i don no..it looks good to me ! | |
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Osamah Super Moderator
Number of posts : 153 Age : 33 Location : R.A.K Registration date : 2008-05-10
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:08 am | |
| well.....lay it on.....i suggest pm it to salman..... | |
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FahimK Advance Member
Number of posts : 83 Age : 31 Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student Registration date : 2008-05-16
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Thu Jun 12, 2008 8:09 am | |
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Salman Adminstrator
Number of posts : 98 Age : 33 Location : Mamourah,Rak School : Indian School 2008-2009 Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Thu Jun 12, 2008 5:12 pm | |
| Gud Work There...I think We Will Refine The Lyrics and do some minor changes like I remember the necklace which had your initials kept is safe never let it get harm close to my heart..close to my heart..
And We will Definitely Shorten it..And We Are Definitely not using the last line | |
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