Rakrockerz

Login To Get Full Rights
Rakrockerz

Login To Get Full Rights
Rakrockerz
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.


Place Where You Can Find New Releases & Other Info.
 
HomeSearchLatest imagesRegisterLog in
Who is online?
In total there are 2 users online :: 0 Registered, 0 Hidden and 2 Guests

None

Most users ever online was 128 on Thu Jul 04, 2019 6:22 am
Latest topics
» ..::C O U N T D O W N::..
SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyThu Jul 15, 2010 11:37 pm by Atiq

» Guess.......Whoz next????
SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyMon Mar 29, 2010 10:37 pm by h3art_navigator

» Nokia 5800 and N97 Theme - Three
SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptySun Dec 20, 2009 10:20 pm by Osamah

» GTA Balad Of Gay Tony Tone
SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptySun Dec 20, 2009 10:08 pm by Osamah

» Faraz'z Blog!!-Secrets & Much More!(Xclusive Inside Content)
SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptySun Jul 05, 2009 7:08 pm by Salman

» PROJECT NATAL ROCKS!!! (XBOX360)
SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptySat Jun 13, 2009 1:57 am by Osamah

» SecureWord.Mobile v1.5
SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyFri May 22, 2009 4:46 am by Omar

» The Sims 3 [MULTI20]
SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 20, 2009 9:16 pm by Osamah

» 21 - 2008, DVDrip - XviD - aXXo
SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyMon May 18, 2009 11:33 pm by S@llu


 

 SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^

Go down 
5 posters
Go to page : 1, 2  Next
AuthorMessage
FahimK
Advance Member
Advance Member
FahimK


Male
Number of posts : 83
Age : 31
Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines
School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student
Registration date : 2008-05-16

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 5:31 am

ok..first i gotta say...i made this IN SCHOOL ..so it isnt complete NOR is it done right...its jus like...something i made up...im still fixing n trying to think more. Its real messy. There is no "Chorus" an all yet...cuz not done like i said..jus wanted to post this ...so i can keep it here n edit later n get suggestions or stuff...hope its ok...

lemme no wat u all think...or...IF u think something of this Razz..cuz its not good ^_^


Shattered

[Chorus]
*Its shattered,
nothing in this life now matters.
Im just a living body with no soul,
living in this world for a reason i don't no.*



[Verse]
I remember,
the small necklace locket
which had your initial.
I had it with me,
kept is safe and close to my heart,
and never let it get harm.

I remember,
it had these, three,
diamonds on them.
They were my meaning to be,
and even before our relationship
came to an end,
these diamonds kept
falling and breaking apart!!

And this is when I understood,
that for me....
There is no reason to be.
Don’t you see!
This is what lies behind these symbols,
that we pretend not to see!

The truth,
is what we ignore and don’t want to live with.
Only lies!
That is what we want to be with.

Now we are no longer with each other,
but still you talk,
like nothing has ever happened before...before...before.

[Chorus x1]

[Verse 2]

You tell me you like me,
Then you tell me you dont.
What is the reason behind this,
Why don't i get to know!!

What is it that i have done,
That I have not even known!

.......(some music)

[Verse 3] ( i guess )

Now the tears are flowing down,
like the stormy weather's rain falling from the sky.
It feels like the Gods wrath is upon me,
smiting me down,
like I have the Spawn of Satan inside.

But something tells me,
it isn't his wrath,
but his mercy upon me,
showing me the right path,
and trying to keep me away from this meaningless life.

So now i just wait for the end,
singing this sad song of my story,
telling this to the people who are deceiving,
that to be truthful, and don't tell or live with lies,
because in the end of your life,
there will be only Hell on your side.

[Chorus x1]


(lemme no about it...thx.)







Last edited by FahimK on Fri Jun 20, 2008 5:03 am; edited 9 times in total (Reason for editing : Editing the song)
Back to top Go down
Atiq
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Atiq


Male
Number of posts : 102
Age : 32
Location : Nakheel
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 5:27 pm

Beautiful!!
i liked it.
Back to top Go down
Osamah
Super Moderator
Super Moderator
Osamah


Male
Number of posts : 153
Age : 33
Location : R.A.K
Registration date : 2008-05-10

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 8:35 pm

good.....well...you gotta work on the chorus.......its seriously good.....keep up.....
Back to top Go down
Salman
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Salman


Male
Number of posts : 98
Age : 33
Location : Mamourah,Rak
School : Indian School 2008-2009
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 9:47 pm

I Liked It Too..Let's see how it ends up..
Back to top Go down
http://www.rakrockerz.110mb.com
S@llu
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
S@llu


Male
Number of posts : 151
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 9:54 pm

I strongly think this lyrics should be copyright ...wht abt u salman?
Back to top Go down
http://www.rakrockerz.110mb.com/sallu.html
Salman
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Salman


Male
Number of posts : 98
Age : 33
Location : Mamourah,Rak
School : Indian School 2008-2009
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 10:02 pm

Ya I think It Should Be Copyrighted Once Fahim Finishes It Completely.... bom
Back to top Go down
http://www.rakrockerz.110mb.com
Atiq
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Atiq


Male
Number of posts : 102
Age : 32
Location : Nakheel
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 10:08 pm

U mean we should give the people the right to copy?
Back to top Go down
Salman
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Salman


Male
Number of posts : 98
Age : 33
Location : Mamourah,Rak
School : Indian School 2008-2009
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 10:14 pm

^^We will be the first one to Copy it..!!
Back to top Go down
http://www.rakrockerz.110mb.com
Atiq
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Atiq


Male
Number of posts : 102
Age : 32
Location : Nakheel
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 10:16 pm

May we faheem??
Back to top Go down
S@llu
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
S@llu


Male
Number of posts : 151
Age : 33
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 10:17 pm

we mean copyright protected ..

Definition:

Creative artist's control of original work: the legal right of creative artists or publishers to control the use and reproduction of their original works




Copyright, branch of law granting authors the exclusive privilege to reproduce, distribute, perform, or display their creative works. The goal of copyright law is to encourage authors to invest effort in creating new works of art and literature. Copyright is one branch of the larger legal field known as intellectual property, which also includes trademark and patent law. Copyright law is the legal foundation protecting the work of many major industries, including book publishing, motion-picture production, music recording, and computer software development. These industries account for considerable economic activity in the United States, making copyright law a field of enormous economic importance.

Not every work of authorship is eligible for copyright. To qualify for copyright protection, a work must be both fixed and original. The law considers a work to be fixed if it is recorded in some permanent format. Acceptable ways of fixing a work include writing it down, storing it on a computer floppy disk or compact disc (CD), recording it on videotape, or sculpting it in marble. If a poet thinks of a new poem and recites it to an audience without writing it down, copyright does not protect the poem because it is not fixed. To be original, the work must not be copied from previously existing material and must display at least a reasonable amount of creativity. For example, if an author writes the words “the sky is blue” on a piece of paper, copyright does not protect the words because they lack sufficient creativity. Consequently, short phrases and titles are usually not protected by copyright, but in some circumstances they may be protected by trademark law.

Copyright only protects the words, notes, or images that the creator has used. It does not protect any ideas or concepts revealed by the work. If, for example, a scientist publishes an article explaining a new process for refining oil, the copyright prevents others from copying the words of that article. It does not, however, prevent anyone else from using the process described to refine oil. To protect the process, the scientist must obtain a patent. Similarly, if a novelist writes a book about a man obsessed about killing a whale, other people may write their own books on the same subject, as long as they do not use the exact words or a closely similar plot
Back to top Go down
http://www.rakrockerz.110mb.com/sallu.html
Atiq
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Atiq


Male
Number of posts : 102
Age : 32
Location : Nakheel
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 10:19 pm

My days!!!!
Back to top Go down
Salman
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Salman


Male
Number of posts : 98
Age : 33
Location : Mamourah,Rak
School : Indian School 2008-2009
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed May 28, 2008 10:20 pm

^^^^LOL
Back to top Go down
http://www.rakrockerz.110mb.com
FahimK
Advance Member
Advance Member
FahimK


Male
Number of posts : 83
Age : 31
Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines
School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student
Registration date : 2008-05-16

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyThu May 29, 2008 12:12 am

wow...cool...thx guys, im happy u guys liked it ^-^.

i showed this song to like 2 guys here ..they liked it too ...^_^..so happy ..lol..

as for you guys to have this..umm..lemme thiiiink.. ..no im jus kidding.

u guys can have it. like use it, cuz i probably wont be singing as no band here....in which i am...i might be in one later, but yea...im making this so u guys can use it ..if u want to. i dunno about me using this....so all urs.. ..wen i finish it...which will take alot of time....the chorus ..trying to get it good ...so sorry for the wait ^_^

n how do u copyright ;p..cuz i don no how to...u guys shud do it.
Back to top Go down
Atiq
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Atiq


Male
Number of posts : 102
Age : 32
Location : Nakheel
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyThu May 29, 2008 2:17 am

Take ur time . We've got exams anyway.
Back to top Go down
FahimK
Advance Member
Advance Member
FahimK


Male
Number of posts : 83
Age : 31
Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines
School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student
Registration date : 2008-05-16

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyThu May 29, 2008 7:06 am

ahh..fine fine ^_^
Back to top Go down
Osamah
Super Moderator
Super Moderator
Osamah


Male
Number of posts : 153
Age : 33
Location : R.A.K
Registration date : 2008-05-10

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyThu May 29, 2008 7:40 pm

dont worry man.....ones it's copyrighted....we may sing it on fancy fete......
Back to top Go down
FahimK
Advance Member
Advance Member
FahimK


Male
Number of posts : 83
Age : 31
Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines
School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student
Registration date : 2008-05-16

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyThu May 29, 2008 8:24 pm

sweet ^_^. That wud be awsome!
Back to top Go down
FahimK
Advance Member
Advance Member
FahimK


Male
Number of posts : 83
Age : 31
Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines
School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student
Registration date : 2008-05-16

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptySun Jun 01, 2008 4:34 am

any suggestions about anything? got anything u want me to do? any help...lemme no ...cuz i think im done ..-_^
Back to top Go down
Salman
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Salman


Male
Number of posts : 98
Age : 33
Location : Mamourah,Rak
School : Indian School 2008-2009
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptySun Jun 01, 2008 10:07 pm

We Are Quite Busy With Our Xamz..Once It Gets Over We Will See bout it..
Back to top Go down
http://www.rakrockerz.110mb.com
FahimK
Advance Member
Advance Member
FahimK


Male
Number of posts : 83
Age : 31
Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines
School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student
Registration date : 2008-05-16

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptySun Jun 01, 2008 10:59 pm

oh oh..yea...sorry Razz..lol..i keep forgetting....no worries...ill wait
Back to top Go down
Osamah
Super Moderator
Super Moderator
Osamah


Male
Number of posts : 153
Age : 33
Location : R.A.K
Registration date : 2008-05-10

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed Jun 11, 2008 1:46 am

back again....last exam left.........monitoring the site....ook people whats new..............?
Back to top Go down
FahimK
Advance Member
Advance Member
FahimK


Male
Number of posts : 83
Age : 31
Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines
School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student
Registration date : 2008-05-16

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyWed Jun 11, 2008 4:35 am

well...i think the songs done..kinda....an i cant do much on it i guess....cuz i got exams this week coming...AND......i don no..it looks good to me !
Back to top Go down
Osamah
Super Moderator
Super Moderator
Osamah


Male
Number of posts : 153
Age : 33
Location : R.A.K
Registration date : 2008-05-10

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyThu Jun 12, 2008 3:08 am

well.....lay it on.....i suggest pm it to salman.....
Back to top Go down
FahimK
Advance Member
Advance Member
FahimK


Male
Number of posts : 83
Age : 31
Location : Canada, Ontario, St. Catharines
School : St.Catharines Collegiate ....Former IHS student
Registration date : 2008-05-16

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyThu Jun 12, 2008 8:09 am

alrite
Back to top Go down
Salman
Adminstrator
Adminstrator
Salman


Male
Number of posts : 98
Age : 33
Location : Mamourah,Rak
School : Indian School 2008-2009
Registration date : 2008-05-09

SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ EmptyThu Jun 12, 2008 5:12 pm

Gud Work There...I think We Will Refine The Lyrics and do some minor changes
like I remember the necklace which had your initials kept is safe never let it get harm close to my heart..close to my heart..

And We will Definitely Shorten it..And We Are Definitely not using the last line
Back to top Go down
http://www.rakrockerz.110mb.com
Sponsored content





SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty
PostSubject: Re: SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^   SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^ Empty

Back to top Go down
 
SUBMISSION by Fahim Khan ^_^
Back to top 
Page 1 of 2Go to page : 1, 2  Next
 Similar topics
-
» Submission: Under my bed .. - Aleks An.
» SUBMISSION By Waseem
» SUBMISSION: Love? -- Faux pas. - Aleks An.

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Rakrockerz :: Rockerz Rulez :: .::Creativity Section::.-
Jump to: